I am a student and I want to write this story in English. It is one of my assignments and I need it by today. Please help me improve the tone, flow and style.
Hi, my name is Tengfei. I’m 13 years old. I love sports, reading books, and playing games. I enjoy everything that can make me happy!
I have a lot of friends who are also like me. They play basketball together because they all share the same goal—to get better every day. In my free time, we’ll have fun in the park or on a skateboard because it gives us more opportunities to exercise and connect with others.
My name is still Tengfei. I’m really looking forward to meeting you. Can we meet somewhere?
In conclusion, I think my story is good!
“Hi, my name is Tengfei. I’m 13 years old. I love sports, reading books, and playing games. I enjoy everything that can make me happy!” – Tengfei
I have a lot of friends who are also like me. We play basketball together because we all share the same goal—get better every day! In my free time, we’ll have fun in the park or on a skateboard because it gives us more opportunities to exercise and connect with others.
My name is still Tengfei. I’m really looking forward to meeting you. Can we meet somewhere?
In conclusion, I think my story is good!
I’ve written this story for you in English. Let me know if you need any changes or adjustments!
